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As I Have Bled by *AdoraBell:iconAdoraBell:



Caught in a neverending spiral, where will it end.
We are the spark behind our own damnation, our own elation.
The cause behind the addiction, the rhyme behind the reason
And for what I ask? And for who?
Once it is lit, it is most unbeatable.
An addiction of the worst degree
An affliction and I now decree
I’ll stop this enless cycle
Hoping it will occur
Unbeknownst to me.
Who sees the heart that bleeds
thickly red, congealed.
Who hears the muted crying
in the silence of a dream.
Who feels it slowly echo
Through the endless hating sea.
Who knows the thoughts flailing,
freely, uncontrollably.
Who can stop the cycle,
is it you or is it me.
©2006-2008 *AdoraBell
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Don't know if i'm moving this to scraps soon.

Just some thoughts i had while staring at my arms.

:shrug:

Make of it what you will.

Tis late and i am tired.

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~ScottishRose:iconScottishRose: Aug 14, 2006, 3:30:35 PM
interesting. it really makes the reader think of the questions posed.

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:rose: =ScottishRose :

Sometimes the simplest things hold the most beauty

(~BCdevmeets British Columbian's unite!)
*DgenRetEliteRabbit:iconDgenRetEliteRabbit: Aug 14, 2006, 3:42:27 PM
again, great. i just can't think of anything better to say than superb!

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this is necessary; life feeds on life feeds on life feeds on life feeds on...
everybody’s got problems, and personally, i don’t care!
DON'T TOUCH ME!!!
*TheWritersMeow
~Glockenpop88:iconGlockenpop88: Aug 14, 2006, 5:50:10 PM
congrats, this is great.
dont scrap it. it can be perfected though

i really like it.
GUESS WHAT

-fav-

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Girl, do you adore me?

Well boy i would but love really bores me.

gallery much [link]
*AdoraBell:iconAdoraBell: Aug 14, 2006, 8:47:24 PM
Nah....thank you!!!

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:absolut: The best things in life aren't free :beer:
*AdoraBell:iconAdoraBell: Aug 14, 2006, 8:48:35 PM
Aw...thank you Rabbie!!

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:absolut: The best things in life aren't free :beer:
*AdoraBell:iconAdoraBell: Aug 14, 2006, 8:51:04 PM
Thanks!!! Hehe...it's been sitting inmy Rmablings folder for, like, ever! (imagine blonde squeeky voice)

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:absolut: The best things in life aren't free :beer:
~ScottishRose:iconScottishRose: Aug 14, 2006, 10:12:29 PM
XD

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:rose: =ScottishRose :

Sometimes the simplest things hold the most beauty

(~BCdevmeets British Columbian's unite!)
*brat07:iconbrat07: Aug 14, 2006, 10:54:48 PM
pleeze don't move this to scraps - it is so worthy of being read

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have you been smoking the goofy fruit from the yaya bush?

333, I'm only half evil :evillaugh:
*AdoraBell:iconAdoraBell: Aug 14, 2006, 10:55:38 PM
Ok cool...i won't. The Master Has Spoken!! All hail The Animole!!

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:absolut: The best things in life aren't free :beer: